Storyboard Feedback

Just had some positive feedback for my rough storyboard, although there are a few tweaks that need to made. Predominantly on the ending, as currently the character leaves without knowing he has won. But as I want the story to be funny I am changing the ending so that the animals celebrate, he realises and all the characters celebrate together. I'd like it to be a happy ending. As the overall message is the classic 'if at first you don't succeed, try, try again".